55 Fiction: An Unread Mail

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

An Unread Mail

Sweat droplets trickled down on to his lappy. It was giving a beep sound indicating low battery. His hands were shaking and he, with utmost difficulty, clicked the mouse to open that unread mail

The screen showed

“Loading mail….”


The mail read, “May Payroll: Unable to credit salary”

And lappy shutsdown….

He’s dumbstruck!!!


One comment on “55 Fiction: An Unread Mail

  1. Sreesasasanka G says:

    Sensational emotions on the hero’s face. This is by far the best of your works. Kudos!!!

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